I just finished the demo and I was reeeaaally into the story, buuut I think that *visually*, in the sprites, the characters look somewhat bland and generic. I guess that happens because (1) most of the clothes are very bland (although very realistic) and (2) all the characters have the same nose and mouth. That made it kinda hard for me to want to get to know the characters more and have a relationship with them.
The only exception for me was Tommy, that looks unique and like an important character.
As I said, this only goes for the sprites. In the "cutscenes", the characters looked much better.
I also think it could use a little bit more choices in some situations like a reaction when Tommy is bullied.
THAT BEING SAID, I repeat: I reeeaallly liked the story, great job. I'd very much like to play the full version and have a throuple with Tommy and Ellis 🙃.