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First, I loved the reference to Konosuba ! In view of your notes, i was expected to see horror elements early but i was pleasantly surprised to don't see this yet(except for the introduction scene) and that's nice for me that you take your time to introduce the characters without going too fast in the horror elements.

(Also, i love rewatch the first conversation between Xzav and Varion idk why but i think just that the reactions of Xzav are really enjoying to see.) Btw, like said Offlinewolf, the characters change expression mid-dialogue adds value to this game and helps to make it unique according to me. That's really a good idea that you had here !

I'm looking forward for the next update ! But, obviously, take your time ! (sorry for my mistakes, that's my first feeback in a foreign language.) 

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Oh geeze, thanks so much for playing and enjoying the vn!

And yes, the horror elements will appear much later in the story, I do think it's best to introduce the characters more thoroughly first to give context on the whys and hows of the actions and decisions of said characters, it also gives me the chance to give clues that will help the player make the best decisions.

Also, it's a great honor to have you give your first feedback on my project, I really appreciate it and hopefully you'll stick around for the future updates of the vn!

Again, thank you so much xd

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You're welcome !

I'm glad that we still have sometime before importants choices of life and death. I really like your writing about chill conversations. They are enjoyable to see (especially with Xzav and Zach eheh)

To be honest, i wanted give a feedback to one or two others games previously but i never dared to do this. I feared that my feedback would be useless or incomprehensible but you take the time to respond to all the comments so i think that was a good push for me to dare to make one ! (sorry again for the mistakes).