Is it intended to be a character trait of the MC to describe everything in character? He certainly is portrayed as a bit absent minded, but it still feels like the majority of these descriptions are things a narrator would describe, not a character.
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Hahaha, yes that's a thing for the MC at the moment.
He's supposed to be absent minded but we agree that he should describe less things and be more part of them. This was something we decided to change rather late because we were using the MC to describe the scenes, and then realized how odd it seemed.
In the next versions we will be changing this to sound more natural.
Thank you for the feedback!