Thank you for playing our game!
Yes, we have received similar feedback from other peers and we are checking on it. After replaying the game a bit more slowly, we realized similar things like you mentioned. There's definitely some improvements to be made, specially in the selection of words and in some long-winded parts.
We would like to correct these and upload a new version of the demo with the revised text, hopefully sounding more natural and keeping the flow of the game.
Stay tuned!