The idea is interesting! But I feel it is a bit over-ambitious :c The visuals don't load very well, in fact for a moment I thought the game had frozen, because it didn't show me a load bar at the start.
Some of the choices have too small a font to read too... all and all, I think the idea behind this all is good, but you should try to focus less about visual style and more on keeping things simpler and more easy to understand!