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Orlon the dog
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I am in love. I really enjoyed this, the little details on how to prepare the coffee, making sure the "condiment" doesn't lose all taste in there~ Good stuff. And the twist... I can't say I didn't see it coming but, it was done in such a cool way!!!
I love this and I would love to read more in this setting.
To think you did this in three days it's impressive!! I am absolutely thinking about you! (?) :3
There are some quirks about the english translation that I would recommend you check next time if you wanna put things in english! I am not a native myself but I still noticed some. Still, the atmosphere is very nice, the musical theme you made was spooky and I personally really liked it!! And I got to kill a rat :3
So, I am satisfied -u- good, fun, short adventure
It's a hard moment when you realize you've completely lost yourself, and that it is no one's fault but your own.
Man this was a good one. A bit heavy narrative-wise in some spots but I blame my non-native grasp of english for that. You all created a very interesting and, honestly very deep experience here. I loved it.
I like these sorts of scenarios, and you got an interesting worldbuilding going on! :3 I liked it!!
I would say the same I've told others about dosifying your text a bit more though! Throwing shorter bursts of texts can make it more manegeable and less intimidating than letting several paragraphs at once. But that's just my advice! I liked it!
I have never hated a person as much as I hated that doctor! Poor Angela :c I am sad this ended up this way but, hey, at least the creature did their best to help.
This was great, the idea was interesting, the execution too!! Honestly I just wish people could get along but... sometimes I guess one lets the stress get the best out of us.
THERE WAS A MOMENT WHERE I SHOULD HAD STOPPED AND I CLEARLY WENT PAST IT. SO LET'S KEEP GOING WITH THIS REVOLUTION AND SEE WHAT HAPPENS.
This is so witty and fun, I had a blast! And I will probably go back later to try and actually learn why was I locked up for...
Probably crossed the street recklessly or something. I am a rebel like that, apparently?
I have lied to a child and I have never felt better about it : D
This was a very curious and very fun experience to be honest! The hints were clear, the way to get through this was up for the player's wits, and allowing us to make words ourselves is such a clever touch!! Also the emojis. I generally find them annoying but here, here they fit perfectly! <3 So, I love it.
One comment though, the heart-eyes emoji gets buried under the dialogue text! Maybe something to check on the code?
The game itself looks so nice, very well coded! And I will jump on the bandwagon of how cool it is that you all managed to get this on three days, it's crazy!! The narrative gets a bit... confusing, though. I am not sure if I followed the story well...
Those sprites looked delightful, though. You all did a great job.
I really, REALLY enjoyed this one~ Thrillers are my life and having to deal with the constant lack of consciousness was terrifying and made for great tension!! The story hooks you up soon, the setting is easy to understand once you get on track, and by the end of it all... well...
I at least did my best to save a life.
Great game, great dynamic.
WHY WONT THIS PUMPKIN FLUSH DOWN MY TOILET?!?!!?
I loved this idea, I loved how humurous this whole ordeal was, and I just... loved this. A great, creative work!! <3
If you don't mind my little advice, I would say that you dosify the text a bit more. Putting so many paragraphs at once could be intimidating to some readers (I know, text in a text adventure!? the world shocked!!). Also in the ending where I summoned my Ghost Dad, it didn't give me a way to Try Again :c not sure if that was planned.
Anyways, it was great and I love it.
Started with a relatable feeling of trying to help someone who's not used to write with a story. Then it become something so bittersweet, about the ways we try to connect with people, how sometimes gestures are misunderstood... and how we still may appreciate them more than we really remember.
I didn't expect this to get that deep and heartwarming, but honestly? I am happy it did.
A new favorite. I will look for that recipe later.
It was quick, short, funny~ Brave one making stuff on Godot, well done!!
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...............................WAIT DID YOU JUST RICKROLL ME--
Edit: OH RIGHT! I just remembered! The song kinda leans heavy on the left headphone for some reason? At least for me? :o Would be worth to check for future projects
Ohhhhhhhhhh I've been wanting to check this one for a looooong while now!!!! And it really did not disappoint now that I really got to it!!
It feels like Good Omens in a way? A way that I really dig?? And the way the Gods just roll their eyes "YEAH SURE FIRE, WHATEVER!!!". I guess they were just testing you, to see what you'd do...
I am fine with this outcome 100% -u- Let it come! I'll see what I can do with my 75 years.
I have said before that the art already hooked me~ And finally getting to play this has only made it more so!! This whole experiment is so nice, and I am surprised you managed to pull this off in three days, bravo!!!
Turns out I am terrible with mushrooms but, still, these puzzles were so clever! I had fun : 3 and now my best friend is a cat that eats my food and sleeps in my bed. What a nice fella (?)
You somehow managed to capture the god damn feeling of frustration, restlessness, anxiety and deep self-hatred of an all nighter trying to push a project down the teacher's throat. It is a feeling I did NOT want to remember and I resent you all for it (?)
But jokes aside this was GREAT! I honestly felt pretty captivated by the entire premise, how it all advances, the way you formatted everything is just lovely... I am in love with this one.
This was a very nice story, about a kitty trying his best to solve a situation they had nothing to do with. I really liked it, the idea, the execution, the art! It was all great! <3 I loved it.
One piece of advice, at least from me, is to let go a bit of the commas. I don't know why but sometimes the phrases felt a bit stuttery at the start. But maybe it is just me!
If someone asked me "What do you mean when you say something oozes style?" I would point them to this. God, THIS. It's great, it's so fucking sincere with what it is, with what it wants to say, it's just... teenager energy, rebellious energy, stuff that I didn't really resonate with when I was at that age but... it certainly does ring familiar, I saw it with my own eyes.
I loved it. Great experience! But I would change the font of the game prompts and such, I feel it gets lost in the colourful overload that is the Zine itself!! Also a warning about the loud sounds at the start might not go amiss @w@ The voice lines and general music are crispy and GREAT, but I almost jumped off my chair when the first line yelled at me!!
The idea is interesting! But I feel it is a bit over-ambitious :c The visuals don't load very well, in fact for a moment I thought the game had frozen, because it didn't show me a load bar at the start.
Some of the choices have too small a font to read too... all and all, I think the idea behind this all is good, but you should try to focus less about visual style and more on keeping things simpler and more easy to understand!
I have to go with the flow here, yeah your visual presentation is TOP NOTCH. Great effect with the quick swing of colours, the mood you set for this strange prison is great! You really have a hold of format. The story itself is good too, but I did feel a bit confused on my first playthrough... it feels a bit too sudden?
Then again, these works are made under time limits so, it's fine. I liked it!