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This was a very nice story, about a kitty trying his best to solve a situation they had nothing to do with. I really liked it, the idea, the execution, the art! It was all great! <3 I loved it.

One piece of advice, at least from me, is to let go a bit of the commas. I don't know why but sometimes the phrases felt a bit stuttery at the start. But maybe it is just me!

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Thanks for your nice descrption and feedback :)
And yes, it's not just you. I'm quite sure, that I often use a butchered coma rule version of my native language in English and its a good advice to up my game here