An interesting idea, but the point of view jumps all over the place. We're making choices for Alexa and for Gaby, and eventually, the story ends abruptly when you choose the choice 'Knock! Knock! Knock!' Still, I was intrigued by the snippet I was able to understand, and would love to know where you were going with this. Did you post the source code anywhere? Would you be willing to post a plot summary (marked 'spoilers' if necessary)?