I think this is really cool, but I only like the first character, mainly since they have the lowest frames. The other characters just aren't that fun as you can't be precise and fast with them when the game needs you to, even on the easiest AI. You need to change them to be better and more fun to play. The VN section is pretty nice and I like the graphics you made. It needs a lot of refinements, it's pretty rough right now. But this can be something extremely good with all the potential it has. I'm looking forward to more updates in the future.