Thanks for your thoughtful critique! One of the things I was least sure about when I submitted the game was how well the horror elements worked, as a couple of them are a little goofy, so it's good to know that they don't feel too out of place.
And yeah. I definitely agree that subtitles would have been a good addition; even as a native English speaker I prefer to have them. When I first added the voiceover I planned to add subtitles to go with it, but it was just one of those things that I had to cut due to time constraints! Hope it wasn't too hard to follow what was going on, either way.
Thanks for playing!