Not a lot of feedback to give at this point, but the opening passages did intrigue me and I found myself wondering how it tied into the story with the kids. I would have liked a little more detail about the school situation, there was a certain suspension of disbelief having the teachers confiscate the kids' phones while also essentially abandoning them. The logistics confused me a little. Also there was a bit of a readability issue with that light grey gradient, I'd recommend a flat colour that contrasts well with the text colour.