I don't usually play this type of game but your art really caught my attention so I gave it a go.
The look and feel of the game made me feel like this was more of a serious horror than a load noise jump scare kind of game which isn't a negative, but the amount of reading involved made this feel like a book instead of an interactive experience however I know this is a demo so take that criticism with a pinch of salt I'm sure you're working on adding more elements in later versions and when you release them I'll happy play again.
Although like I said this felt like a book the art is amazing and the amount of work you must have put into the script tells me you really care about this game which I applaud.
Keep up the good work.