I think "Why there suddenly is a portal in my bedroom?" should be "Why is there suddenly a portal in my bedroom?". And somehow a single "you" escaped from the sentence "we will watch you while work". Also, "your face adorned with a filthy gRin" (the r is not there, and it should be). When you get the quest [Going full nude, or not], it says "Got quest [Going full nude, oF not]".