I just finished reading your visual novel and I enjoyed it. It's very wholesome and I like how you utilised some Japanese folklore into your story. I also enjoyed the subtle animations in your work. You've handled the anime art style very well and the illustrations of your youkai are amazing, I also like the coloring style you opted for, it gives that ukiyo-e style aesthetic. The illustrations of your characters are really good, and your background art is very clean and crisp. Guess my only critique would be the pacing of the story, but overall this was an excellent work.