An interesting piece on the human decomposition. It was definitely unique in it's tone and the story presented
The sound fx and osts were perfect as well as the dreary artstyle. The characters also seemed to fit well for the theme as well.
That said, there were a few bumps in the road, as is to be expected in any game that is to be made within the span of a month. While I've given the creator my personal thoughts, I really think such an interesting premise should be revisited in the future. This idea has loads of potential and with more time then a mere month, I think this idea could be a phenomenal piece for the horror genre of visual novels