Wow, the introduction was amazing, I love the epic music and huge ship passing in the background. The artwork is fantastic too.
I will just point out that the first thing I did when I saw "Press TAB to ...." was instinctively press it, only to be ejected from the level! I was a little confused.
The second level is also very moody, I haven't seen a level that looked quite the way you've achieved, I like it! It plays very nicely overall.
Shame to see this is abandoned, it's a great start!