Please forgive our grammar, we do not yet have enough money to hire an English translator and we use a neural network translator. In the next update a male protagonist is planned (this will not be a simple replacement of the protagonist).
While I'm not any kind of professional, I could try and give it a look over to correct some things? From what I recall, the weirdest parts of the dialogue for Karina's victory, is just her saying she presses the female MC to her bosom - when she's clearly pushing her down into her womanly bit!
And oooh, interesting indeed!