Trivia with verb tense:
Is it worth putting in conditional text to say something like "The Enchanter will help you repair the compass <if renown < 5>when you reach<else><now you've reached> 5 renown." once the player that level?
More typo trivia:
The Avatar of Doom sends dozens of (crystals spikes) -> crystal spikes (3 places in source)
The Goliath (attack) with its claws -> (attacks) (2 places in source)