Great visuals and nice-looking trailer. You've done a great job with the Press Kit!
Suggestions:
-- Include gameplay in your trailer.
-- Set up a Call to Action link : This could be a Google Play page where people can Wishlist the game or a mailing list so they can get notified when it comes out. (Follow on Itch is probably not going to be very effective for a mobile game)
-- Could include a Minecraft meets XYZ game type description -- lot of people like this type of breakdown.