The colour palette is very striking in this, makes your screenshot very eye catching. However I'm a bit confused as to what the game is. Your press kit makes it sound like an asset pack? Or a game builder like Dreams or Mario Maker. Your tweet says it's a puzzle platformer. It might be both, but as a reader I'm a little confused unfortunately.
I think an animation/gif/video of some sort may help clear some things up if that's possible? And work on the way you describe your game to others :) try getting other people to play your game, and get them to describe the game back to you.