I really like the tone you use (i.e. I can hear the pirate voice reading your stuff out). Your tweet is a little messy and has too many hashtags, so I don't really know how the game itself plays. Looks cool though.
P.S. The line "Yarr… Just Play The Game Matey! Tis Free! " made me laugh in your press kit zip section, but really don't do that :P just give people the link to your full press kit.