Good artwork and the Press Kit is nicely laid out.
Suggestions:
-- Flesh out your tweet. The pitch in your Press Kit is good and would work with a bit of tweaking:
A 2D mini-openworld action RPG that simulate a delinquent high school girls life and her vengeance story.
Female duo protagonist, multiple endings, beat'em up gameplay with strong RPG elements.
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