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Great Job on first game! I really enjoyed the concept. As for some feedback, it was difficult to see the orders and their quantity on side the screen. I might recommend putting a background on it to give it some contrast. I would also recommend making the icons smaller. Takes up a decent about of the screen. The people are fun and helpful. I would have liked to click a button to talk to them rather than dialog box pop up each time I walked by them. After a while, all the dialog boxes started to overlap and clutter the bottom half of screen. This made it difficult to see what item were on the bottom to pick up for the orders. Just a few critiques. There's a lot of potential opportunity. Overall, great start and look forward to seeing more!

I originally had it where the player would stop when someone talked to them but very late in the jam I had some issues with my dialog system and had to redo it from scratch and didn't have time to re-implement the stopping sadly. I also tried to change the font colors of the numbers but I definitely could have reworked that to get it to be more clear. Thank you for the feedback, it is really helpful!