Your blurb could not have done a worse job "selling" this VN. You've created an extremely compelling, if slightly predictable, story. The dialogue is flawless, youve captured the MC's malaise so well it feels like I work with these idiots. Having (basically) four characters gives you a real sense of the dynamics between each person, developing their personality. You developed the romance without absolutely kicking a dead horse like a certain very popular AVN on this site. The sex feels somehow tasteful? Im at chapter 8 and had to come leave a comment. Very impressed by your work