My my my, I'm not familiar with the original but so much to say!
You like experimenting and it really shows with the little details. Wonderful use of the neat little binaural panning which gives your tracks a sens of hollowness and space that perfectly fits the atmosphere.
I think you are clearly improving with a more controlled used of distortion, we can see it especially in Flamelurker, that bass is absolutely amazing. Also, I see that you took into account previous remarks, and for example you have a much more controlled use of glitchy/stuttering effects compared to your other tracks like "The Magician theme" (which is still my favorite of yours ^^).
Subtle use of panning for glitchy effects, but I think it could be even more pronounced for things like the glitching choir in Penetrator to add to that sense of danger/uneasiness (like the danger could come from anywhere kinda feeling).
Also, if I had to nitpick a bit more, I would say that your strings staccatos sound a bit weak in Penetrator, compared to the dynamic of the rest of the track. Same thing with the percussions accompanying them.
But that's just nitpicking and the overall submission is fantastic. Great job, I can't wait for your next submission!