What an interesting cover, and amazing atmosphere! Reminds me of Sakuraba.
I really like the lead guitar you've used for this. My only gripe is with the drums. I feel like they don't exactly match the style you were going for, maybe some reverb on the drums would've helped. That, or making them acoustic drums. Also, perhaps some of those unused frequencies in the background could've been filled out with some strings or choir.
Overall, I really, really enjoyed this though. I've looped it a few times already. Great job.