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Good visuals, but as said before i don't feel like we have a lot of room to actually understand the games mechanics, maybe separating it in multiple levels and removing the time on the first one? Anyways, since you said on the game page that it isn't finished yet i wouldn't be too harsh on it, it still has a lot of potencial to be a really good game overall. Good Luck on your Journey!