I just played through the game and I have to say wow, this is one of the most unique furry visual novels to come out in a while. The art is great, I really like your use of color it really makes the characters pop out in contrast to the background. The story is very interesting, I have to say the pacing did feel a bit rushed but that's understandable considering you had to cut a good chunk of the story due to the workload. The music is really nice, the heavily auto-tuned voice that plays during the main menu is a nice touch.
I notice that you used some Vietnamese words, like Dawn's last name is Sun Bears in Vietnamese and some other names sound viet to me, nothing noteworthy I just thought it's kinda cool as Vietnamese myself.