absolutely loved this VN and can't wait to see more work from you. a little suggestion would be to possibly add more of a conversation about bear being insecure about his size or something along those lines. i'm not sure if he as a character is self conscious, but it could give some representation that normally plus-sized folk may not get in the media, you know. i also really loved [spoiler] the way you portrayed bear's schizophrenia in a way that doesn't make him look "crazy" as the media seems to portray people who have to live with that. overall, an amazing story; 10/10 stars :]