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I really enjoy your little game, well done! =)
Here a bit Feedback
Positive:

  • Art Style is really nice
  • the concept is clever and enjoyable
  •  love the detective board mechanic
  • choices & multiple endings

Negative:

  • the beautiful art style is not consisten through the game (photo backgrounds), characters that seem in different stages of beeing finished
  • some text passage sound a bit weird and seem wrong (I´m not a native english speaker and I assume the Developer is too)
    • still the story comes accross and its understandable, still maybe a proofreader should go over text sometime if it is allowed from the jam rules
  • No Credits in the game itself ;)


Thank you for your hard work and neat little game =)

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Thank you for playing the game, thank you for both positive and negative feedback, it helps us a lot! Thanks for your stream!

And you are right, English is not our native language, unfortunately, we did not have time to proofread the text. We posted the project at the last moment :)