The story of your game is very comedic and the art style is pretty fitting. Also the dialog and the voice acting were besides some mixing and normalizing issues very good.
Things that could be improved are clearly a lot of UI things like the starting point of the text and the hover effect of the buttons and so on.
Also I would have been nice to have guidance like how many choices can I make before the final encounter is happening.
All in all a liked the theme and narrative and command you for your effort walking around your town at night to make photos for the backgrounds. Thank you =)