Tooo
muuuch
dialogues O_O
It would be cool if they appeared as a bit smaller text beneath the Lucia, and didn't block the movement. Also some music and SFX would be cool. I recommend using Jukedeck for music (generate ambient music like this in 1 click) and using something like rFXGen for 8-bit-ish sound effects. Btw that's what helped create sounds and music for my entry :3
At this point, the story of Lucia is short and uncertain, though intriguing and quite atmospheric. I hope you will continue this game!