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I did read both of your comments. I also will relate to that.

Sometimes my words are harsh. That is not a favourable part of my character. I am sorry for that.

I appreciate that you discuss this issue and think about it. And don't get me wrong. It is not about my feelings. This topic is about you. Releasing a game is equal to publish a statement. Unknown people will see that, think and judge about that. The question you have to face is - do you want to be seen this way? You are the dev. You are responsible for any statement you make - even if it is not intentional. And it is not just a simple color choice. "Play as a Female" is pretty direct.

The game itself has real potential. It is worth polishing it and release it as a mobile game. Games in these genre have a good chance to get played very much on smart phones. That is my opinion about what you did develop. But a higher user range will lead to a higher responsibility. And unhappy things might strike back. 

It is just an advice. Finally it is your choice. I wish you all the best.

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Und damit betrachte ich diese Geschichte als erledigt (wird post jam hoch geladen)

Finde ich gut. Pinkscale und Firebolt lassen eure Erzählung auch gleich lebendiger wirken. Was man unter "Couple" verstehen will, ist dann einem selbst überlassen.

Kleine formale Anmerkung:

Einmal ist es "Play as a ..." -> impliziert, dass man einen bestimmten Drachentypen/-gattung spielt.

Dann "Play as ..." -> impliziert, dass es um einen Drachen namens "Firebolt" geht.

Ist keine Kritik. War mir nur aufgefallen, weils unterschiedlich ist. Wenn ihr eure Geschichte genau so erzählen wollt, dann 👍

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Jou Danke, das "a" hab ich bereits raus gelöscht war ein Überbleibsel