Post by Emmett in Looking for playtesters for a solo journaling kaiju ttrpg

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Here you go Mr. Human Do with it what you will. I had a little trouble with pacing between days. I had to come up with reasons to stay in one place. This seems to be geared towards really big cities and I'm just no where near any. I did my best. I had to come up with reasons why I couldn't just walk away from the Kaiju. I also wasn't sure at what point I was supposed to start so that made the beginning a little weird. A lot of the prompts could use some cleaning up as far as grammar. I could always tell what you were getting at though.

On the whole its fun. It took me 6 hours of writing to get through the game.

Cicada Human2 years ago(+1)

Thanks for my first feedback, going to get on fixing these issues. I understand the pacing problem I think, and the staying in place problem. I can fix the confusing start too, and by placing it in a large city I think that will clear things up too. I recently saw the Carta SRD system https://peachgardengames.itch.io/carta-srd and I might regear my game towards that system, but Idk just a thought, can't think of a way for the kaiju to move around yet. Also sorry about the grammar, that's getting fixed too, once I know if I have to replace any writing prompts. Hopefully I can get some more feedback like yours, it has really helped. Feedback and playtesters are the hardest thing for me to come by, so I really really appreciate it and will make sure I give some good feedback on your game as well.

One last thing, the link in your post is just a pdf of my game, was that what you meant to send?