Thanks for my first feedback, going to get on fixing these issues. I understand the pacing problem I think, and the staying in place problem. I can fix the confusing start too, and by placing it in a large city I think that will clear things up too. I recently saw the Carta SRD system https://peachgardengames.itch.io/carta-srd and I might regear my game towards that system, but Idk just a thought, can't think of a way for the kaiju to move around yet. Also sorry about the grammar, that's getting fixed too, once I know if I have to replace any writing prompts. Hopefully I can get some more feedback like yours, it has really helped. Feedback and playtesters are the hardest thing for me to come by, so I really really appreciate it and will make sure I give some good feedback on your game as well.
One last thing, the link in your post is just a pdf of my game, was that what you meant to send?