Hello! Thanks for your recommendations! My apologies for the bad English. I have been trying to get some help in that area but it is hard because I don't want to ask friends to proofread for free every month and the project right now is not making the enough profits to be able to pay someone to do that job. And there is another issue I prefer not to mention here that makes me have more errors when writing and it is hard to notice them. I'm always trying to find ways to solve this issue.
I'm glad you are liking the story! ^_^