I'd like to finish this but not sure if I'll be able to do so before the voting deadline so I'm leaving a comment now. Here's what I have so far:
Wow, what an amazing game! Especially with jam time limits. The graphics are gorgeous and do a good of making areas distinct even with the limited palette. The music is great and sets the mood nicely. I like how the story is delivered - it's cool when games make you piece together a narrative from scraps of information you find. There's lots of great content and gameplay ideas- the spider chases are very tense!
My one criticism is that the lack of access to a map. it's rough navigating such a large world without one. I saw a map button in the controls but it doesn't do anything so I presume it's something you have to find first.