Don't worry man, xou're doing a great job all 'round! ;) Just focus on getting everything all translated, and 1nce it's done, xou can get some1ne to assist xou ^^_ the problem with translating can be a difficult 1ne :/ coz like, maybe xou want to word something in a particular way, but then, people are like "well... that's not common in English, but it can still work". So yeah. Maybe some1ne who speaks Spanish would be a good match for helping xou? I find xour writing style very poetic at times~ Either way it's really good ^^_ I seriously couldn't stop smiling throughout the entire story so far :p
Heh, good ol' Morenatsu ^^_ it's the godfather of all VN's. The "childhood crush" for most of us ^///^ glad to see people are still drawing inspiration from it.
Xou too man, great day/night and keep up the great work \>o< best of luck!