Ofc~! I really genuinely thoroughly enjoyed reading that! Albeit I'm not the most skilled writer by a longshot, I nevertheless hope that my critique of your writing helps with improving it! I mean, your writing is truly amazing as-is already! May I ask what got you into writing in the first place?
Well, I got really into Furry Visual Novels in the second half of 2019—especially Minotaur Hotel—and learned my enjoyment of reading through that. On Christmas 2020, I wrote my first text: a Minotaur Hotel Christmas Fanfic. After that I wrote many short stories. Then later, I made my projects here on itch.io. I still write short stories on SoFurry and FA, but I plan to make a Visual novel of my own soon.