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SCREAMING>??? IM SCREAMING????? ARE YOU LIKE SECRETLY A NEW YORK TIMES BESTSELLER???? BECAUSE THERES NO WAY YOU CAN WRITE THIS GOOD AND NOT BE FAMOUS.?!?!

LIKE BROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I WASN'T JUST READING THE WORDS I WAS FEELING THE WORDS AUGHHHH THE IMAGERY AND THE SHEER TECHNICAL PROWESS IN THE CONSTRUCTION OF THE SENTENCES MAKES ME FEEL LIKE I SHOULD BE BUILDING A TEMPLE TO YOUR WRITING INSTEAD OF SIMPLY READING IT AUGUHGUGHHUGHGUGJGHJGKG

ON ANOTHER POINT THIS WAS INCREDIBLY RELATABLE AND EMOTIONAL AND I REALLY LIKED THE LINE THAT WAS LIKE "unsatisfied thoughts on your in-game avatars" BECAUSE PERSONALLY I FEEL THAT THANK YOU FOR PUTTING IT INTO WORDS
EVERYTHING WAS SO WELL WRITTEN AND REALLY QUITE GOOD
DO YOU LIKE PUBLISH UR WRITING WORK ANYWHERE BC IF U DO I WILL FOLLOW U THERE (please)

if it wasn't evident, i really enjoyed this- and I look foreward to more from you if you plan to write more or make more games :D

on another note: AUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUGHDHGDGJGHAJDG
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T"G?S><MBGJOQ (this was very good)

tkm3 years ago

hey there! thank you so much for the compliments! (and the keyboard smashes and all caps; i'm pretty fond of those myself lol) i really appreciate it! it took me by surprise that you managed to find this thing!; i feel like it's a bit buried haha. i really try to make my characters relateable and realistic, so i'm glad that you could find something to relate to santi about haha :). (of course, they say write what you know, and in-game avatar dissatisfaction is something i'm all too familiar with haha.)

i really do hope to create more games in the future! the problem is, of course, ideas! (whether lack of them or excess of them!) currently, i'm working on a comic, so i have been primarily focused on that as well, but i'm almost done with the first draft which means (drumroll please) a chance to start another project!!!! if you have any ideas, i'd love to hear them. creativity is at its peak in collaboration (that's what i think, anyway)!

currently, i'm only on wattpad. my account is @ soft-spots if you'd like to follow me there. i don't have much up yet besides some poems and flash fiction, but i hope to update it soon. what i *do* have, though, is a version of "deep breaths" with a couple of additional scenes i added just to make up for the fact that it's slightly less interactive! so that works out nicely if you are a fan of this :D.

you totally made my day and you seem super cool! feel free to reach out whenever!

plasmilk3 years ago

You seem really cool too!! I don't know if I would be good at any official type of collaboration, but if you ever want someone to bounce ideas around with, or someone to proofread or critique (or to just chat honestly ahaha) I would be more than happy! You seem like a great person to be friends with :D

my discord tag thing is Cafwin#1081 if you ever feel like chatting, and if you don't- that's totally cool too!
(thanks for the reply by the way :))))

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