Love this! I like each row corresponding to an encounter or scene, and it sounds like The True Name has big gaps of time between each row? We love a timeskip. I wonder if The Skeletons is something to draw from in how it manages movements between time.
I've been tweeting out my drafts in my big meandering twitter wordle thread, my current thing is trying to sort out something that turns mosaics into interesting stat spreads of some kind—it's pretty half-formed at the moment. (My usual mode of design is to make a bunch of little things in varying sizes, so I've been drafting a little zine anthology of them.)