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This indeed is such a hidden gem. The only minor thing that bothered me was the grammar. I do know that this was translated from Spanish to English, but I'm not saying that it was bad. It's definitely readable and understandable but at some times there are different past tenses and present tenses used incorrectly, but other than that, this VN is AMAZING! The story is beautifully written and the CGs and artwork is incredible.  I have only cried to a couple of VNs but this one definitely made me cry the most. Every single character's story has such an amazing and yet tragic story. They all had their own demons but they all have the strength to keep fighting and to keep moving forward. This VN is criminally underrated and I hope that this VN gets more spotlight because this story is so amazing. I can't say it enough of how much I enjoyed reading this. I wish you all the best and I look forward to the future updates. Keep up the amazing work!

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Hi rabdombluefrog hehehe. Thank you very much for your review and your kind words, like i've said before, they really give me the inspiration I need to keep working. And regarding the translation, yup! I can notice the errors too hehehe. That's why I've been working with some testers to improve your reading experience. Thank you very much for your patience! And may the force be with ya! hehehe nwn

Oh, and, hehe, I hope more people can get to read it too :3