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~ El Escritor (The Writer) ~

A romance love story, with a little bit of drama, suspense and humor. · By Seth Baine

Loving this gem I just discovered!!!

A topic by MarriedPanda created Dec 28, 2021 Views: 266 Replies: 9
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wow...and I mean WOW! I CRIED and it was just a beautiful story!!! The characters were so deep and so complex and I loved every single moment of it!

Developer

Awww. thank you very much MarriedPanda!

I would LOVE to be a tester BTW...Just check your email

Developer

Just replied! nwn

I second this! This was the BEST and most beautiful visual novel I've ever played on this site! I am not ashamed to admit I cried half a dozen times or more while playing. The sprites and CGs were also stunning!

It was everything I needed in my life right now! I fell in love with the characters and the story! It will live rent free in the rooftop of my heart for a long time!

Developer (1 edit)

You guys are so kind. Thank you very much for your words! They really gives me the inspiration I need to keep working! nwn

This indeed is such a hidden gem. The only minor thing that bothered me was the grammar. I do know that this was translated from Spanish to English, but I'm not saying that it was bad. It's definitely readable and understandable but at some times there are different past tenses and present tenses used incorrectly, but other than that, this VN is AMAZING! The story is beautifully written and the CGs and artwork is incredible.  I have only cried to a couple of VNs but this one definitely made me cry the most. Every single character's story has such an amazing and yet tragic story. They all had their own demons but they all have the strength to keep fighting and to keep moving forward. This VN is criminally underrated and I hope that this VN gets more spotlight because this story is so amazing. I can't say it enough of how much I enjoyed reading this. I wish you all the best and I look forward to the future updates. Keep up the amazing work!

Developer (1 edit)

Hi rabdombluefrog hehehe. Thank you very much for your review and your kind words, like i've said before, they really give me the inspiration I need to keep working. And regarding the translation, yup! I can notice the errors too hehehe. That's why I've been working with some testers to improve your reading experience. Thank you very much for your patience! And may the force be with ya! hehehe nwn

Oh, and, hehe, I hope more people can get to read it too :3

I discovered this story a few days ago and spend the last 3 days just breathing through the first two acts. It's emotional, and wholesome, but at the same time has intriguing mystery/thriller moments. I absolutely can't wait for the 3rd act! Amazing! You really know how to write emotions.

Developer

Hehehe, thank you Fuzen11. I'm glad you're considering it like that so far. And yes! I'll work and enjoy every minute of this to bring you all english readers Act 3 :3