I really like the choice of just making this about one place. Simple, focused and tightly written.
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Thank you! Historically, I am very bad about allowing my ideas to sprawl and tend to write one-shot that last 3-5 sessions. So here I decided to think of the whole thing as more of an encounter with a hook and a goal. The tightness is definitely the result of extensive editing and tightening of the language. I appreciate the feedback!