There are those games that are submitted in game jams that come across as just unfair to the other participants with how good they are. This is one of those games.
You know what you made, so I don't need to review every detail. The only issue I had was it wasn't finished and had a few bugs -- I actually couldn't reload my save, for example. But the atmosphere, the writing, the UI, and the GAMEPLAY of all things is top notch.
I checked out your profile, and saw that you wish to "some day" work in the game industry. Don't worry. You're more than talented enough to make that happen.
Very nicely done and best of luck to you.