Just finished Ch 15 & 16 and would like to comment on the sex scene UwU as a smut writer, I had no idea what to expect. But I found much appreciation in how xou handled it :) and while xou didn't make it raunchy, explicit, or dirty (which is usually how I like it >.>), it totally works! ^^o most writers skim over these things because it's too hard or they feel stupid writing sex scenes, or worse yet, they decide to write it and do a piss poor job! >_< But xou really *nailed* it~ ;) I like how xou don't go into too much detail, but still get across how important, emotional (and hot), the moment is. And xou accomplished this while still keeping the scene in line with how xou've written the rest of the story. Innocent and passionate, but just sexy enough to make us drool~ :p so kudos! My only concern is that I'd like to see this scene extended. I really enjoyed how xou focused more on the emotion side of things, as opposed to "how hot George's dick felt inside of Lucas with each powerful thrust". So I was a little sad to see it end too soon! QwQ no premature shaming here, but please gives us more! ^__^/