I liked that you used the Deathless-mechanic from The Rolled Standard and the jam, good job. I think this is short, sweet and fits nicely with the illustration.
I like the 2.5 question, although I would prefer a little more motivation to stop the beast. Also if fleshing it out, it could be good to have different signal towers so you could really have something happen throughout – right now it feels like a long battle. Which I guess could also be really cool!
Great job writing this. It's short and concise but packs a lot of flavour! Would make a good zine.