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I really like this. It's easily understandable but still have so much replayability because of the tables. Great job.

There is also something really fun in doing a voices-tables. I was thinking you could also do a reply table? So if certain words are used by players certain actions happen. It makes it a little more dynamic, as it right now seems like the only outcome is flying skulls.

The item at the bottom is really exciting, I might steal that for an adventure. I maybe I'll just run this whole thing once someone peaks into an opening in a rock. 

Great job! 

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Thanks for the comment! I was thinking about specific replys at first too, but eventually left it out, as some other options also. Since I was strugling to fit all of it on one page! Just started to learn how to do layouts properly.

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I should've added that in my comment, I realize you wouldn't be able to fit it in. :) So it was just because I was so excited reading your piece, that my brain started developing stuff – which really marks a quality piece of work.