I see in this game the seed of a very creative person that needs a lil push in order to blossom into something special. The whole experience reminded me of my own bouts with social anxiety. While it was a bit on the short side (not a bad thing, just that it coulda had more within that shortness) I think the visuals complimented what you were setting out to do and the ending really got me.
By the way, I'd make the video unskippable for the first 10 seconds so people actually get to see it. I skipped it by accident and had to play again to see it; and that was only because I knew there was one from discord.
I wanna see more of your work out there!