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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Atmosphere | #1 | 5.000 | 5.000 |
| Overall | #4 | 4.167 | 4.167 |
| Story | #7 | 3.333 | 3.333 |
Ranked from 6 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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I DIDN'T MAKE THE MUSIC PLEASE PLEASE DON'T CREDIT THAT TO ME
tracklist
Ace Combat 3 Electrosphere OST - amorphous
Ace Combat 3 Electrosphere OST - kernel
Ace Combat 3 Electrosphere OST - shorelines
Ace Combat 3 Electrosphere OST - somnus
Sewerslvt - Goodbye
Alright, maybe I'm fucked in the head, but all the grammar and punctuation mistakes were really distracting. I'd recommend using google docs to write the game so it corrects you as you write. God knows it's saved my bacon more than I can count.
Other than that, interesting story and excellent atmosphere. Really liked the music that rose in volume as the MC got more nervous, and the cool-ass cutscene at the end (which I accidentally skipped, you might want to disable that before you show it).
I really liked the schizo atmosphere, I guess now I know how basket feels every day.
If you polish it up, it's got a load of potential. You can do it fam.
I see in this game the seed of a very creative person that needs a lil push in order to blossom into something special. The whole experience reminded me of my own bouts with social anxiety. While it was a bit on the short side (not a bad thing, just that it coulda had more within that shortness) I think the visuals complimented what you were setting out to do and the ending really got me.
By the way, I'd make the video unskippable for the first 10 seconds so people actually get to see it. I skipped it by accident and had to play again to see it; and that was only because I knew there was one from discord.
I wanna see more of your work out there!
The drastic changes in music and scenery really helped sell the mood.
I can relate to the subject matter even if it is fortunately not quite so extreme for me.
Lovely little game that encapsulates everything I'm afraid of on a day to day basis. Dissonant would be a way to describe it, but I think that leaves a rather negative idea, because what's happening in this game is a real story and struggle that a lot of people relate to. Bumping music and some great interesting visuals on deck too.